I think the transparency is really nice when the circles start going off into the green gradient. It looks really cool when each part of the circle gets hit with a bit of the different greens. I also think your design is nice and totally works with the movement of your animation. It makes sense how everything is flowing off the page. The only thing I would say is that maybe you could make the individual triangles move separately, so we could see the transparency between the triangles. But other than that it looks really good!
I like the colors you chose; they're very citrus-y in my eyes. Your animation has a nice outward flow to it and I like how the transparency shows even when the shapes move out of the border. However maybe the three triangles could come apart and flow their own way to give it extra movement. Great work!
I think your overall project is very nicely engineered--everything is very cohesive in form even beyond the color choice! Also your ability to get an accurate transparency throughout is amazing O: !
I think what is most successful in your project is your painting layout, and the fact that your animation utilizes that layout in a very fluid and natural way.
I think the transparency is really nice when the circles start going off into the green gradient. It looks really cool when each part of the circle gets hit with a bit of the different greens. I also think your design is nice and totally works with the movement of your animation. It makes sense how everything is flowing off the page. The only thing I would say is that maybe you could make the individual triangles move separately, so we could see the transparency between the triangles. But other than that it looks really good!
ReplyDeleteI like the colors you chose; they're very citrus-y in my eyes. Your animation has a nice outward flow to it and I like how the transparency shows even when the shapes move out of the border. However maybe the three triangles could come apart and flow their own way to give it extra movement. Great work!
ReplyDeleteI think your overall project is very nicely engineered--everything is very cohesive in form even beyond the color choice! Also your ability to get an accurate transparency throughout is amazing O: !
ReplyDeleteI think what is most successful in your project is your painting layout, and the fact that your animation utilizes that layout in a very fluid and natural way.